Teen Love

by Big D

Please note: The following has language that some would consider explicit.

There he stood, there he cried. Fiftteen year old Dylan Combs cried like a baby in front of his entire gym class, teacher too. But did he care? Hell no, why, because the love of his life cheated on him. That was so not fair, the dumb bitch auctually went started dating a friend of his, david. Oh man did Dylan ever love her. He only cared about her, he would die for her, and everyone damn well knew it. He didnt care about the age difference either, he was 1 year 4 months older than Amanda, his love. He cursed himself so many times when he knew he had done somthing to piss her off. Usually smoking or cussing in front of her. "Stupid Fucker why would you do that? are you trying to fuck youself? Pull it together for her, you love her" he told himself many times. But when he found out it was all for nothing he couldnt take it anymore. That was the last straw, between his shitty home life of a absent drunk dad and a catholic non uderstanding mom, he deciced it was too much. He said to his girl one last time on the phone" Baby, i know about david and i want you to be happy. I forgive you but ill never forgive myself. I have screwed you over for the last time. I love ya babe, see you in hell" was the last she heard before the .45 caliber pistol sent a bullet straight thru his head and thru the phone on the other ear. He lay dead on his kitchen floor for hours before the drunk of a father came home and discovered his dead body. It had a note beside it that read " Dad im so sorry but it wasnt my choice. I love her and i would die for her, you damn well believe it now." He fell to the floor crying because deep down he loved his son. He just didnt know it until it was to late, he wished he had never gone drinking all those times, cursed the lord for taking his son and called 911. Let this be a lesson to all teen girls, dont screw with a guys heart, it has horrible consequesces. (This has been based upon a true story. All names are auctaul names of auctual victims)

-- Big D. Combs


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